Wallace wrote:
It seem like a good enough start as any. It has me wondering what occurred and also what's about to happen.
That's good to hear.
Sydney wrote:
As always, great lighting and colors...the combination of the two defines the season and setting well.
Critique-wise, maybe darken the character's shadow in the third image? Only because the light source behind him is so strong. Beyond that, the story looks intriguing; I'd definitely read on.
Thanks, I was pretty happy with the light.
I see your point about the shadow by his feet, will change that.
Mokonafan wrote:
I don't understand the bottom half of the last frame what I'm looking at, is that all water or water and a rock? :S
The character design is nice, keep at how you're doing the lines in the first frame with many thin lines and only thick where it's most important (like a character - though thick lines throughout aren't necessary). Also if you want a background blurred, it works fine if you outline it then blur it.
Story itself I can't say as there is no narration, I assume to help the "audience" make a partial story in their own heads. So Keep it coming I wanna see how this is going to go! >:D xD
Nice work. :3
Not sure what to tell you about the bottom panel ... it's a rock and I guess I can't see it as anything other than a rock. Not sure how you see it as anything else, could you elaborate on what is unclear?
As for the black outlines, yes I'm testing thicker outlines for foreground objects to help enhance and bring forth details. I usually don't use visible outlines like (at least not in combination with color) so it's a bit of a learning experience for me.
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Griatch