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 Post subject: Critiques
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:36 pm  (#1) 
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So I'm working on this picture and was wondering to get any critiques to see if there is anything I can change to make it look better. Thanks


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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:44 pm  (#2) 
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Beyond wonderful Neal. I'm a huge fan of space art. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:49 pm  (#3) 
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I can't see anything that might need to be changed. Although clouds are rear when it comes to space art, unless is a cloud nebular or something to that effect.
All in all it's a great looking piece of space art. :bigthup

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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:54 pm  (#4) 
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I think it looks great, the colors work and the only thing I can see is maybe that bright star or star light could be behind the clouds a bit. It looks like it is just sitting there. Anyway, very nice work.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 2:41 pm  (#5) 
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Looks beautiful! The only thing I noticed was a sharp transition of color to the right of the galaxy and smaller planet on the right side of the pic. Slight blur or erase (with brush opacity set to 15-20) should soften that nicely. Again, it's gorgeous!!


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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 3:17 pm  (#6) 
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I don’t know enough to critique it, just wanted to say I find it a stunning image :coolthup


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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:14 am  (#7) 
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It's an awesome image but I would remove the spaceman. He seems to serve no purpose and is distracting. Fantastic work though nealienman - keep them coming!


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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2015 9:53 am  (#8) 
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Looks awesome to me. Very nice work.

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 Post subject: Re: Critiques
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:39 pm  (#9) 
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The rings of Saturn that are away from the Sun should be shadowed by the planet.

Yet still, very nice work.

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