Mokonafan wrote:
Wow! Is that the same Mara you've been drawing?
If so she got a super good looks upgrade, wow.
I think she looks very nice! But can use some more dynamic shading, her skin looks flat against her very lovely hair (good work there!). Her lips might wanna be a bit deeper in color to make her mouth more attractive. Depends on her role in the story though.
Sanreils's hair looks good! I think it could use some more highlights, though.
His eyes look a bit unfinished imo, and his lips look a bit weird imo.
His overall appearance looks like an old game! Not pixely but just not overly...realistically defined? I don't know what it is exactly.
Depending on what you want that might be a good thing!
Nice work so far!
Btw are there any other images of your Squirrel? He's so cute!!!
Thanks
I added a bit more shading, although I started to get some banding so there was a pretty tight limit. The lighter parts of her face are a little brighter now.
I'm not sure if darker lips look right. I don't think the character would go out of her way to make them darker, although apparently things like lipstick did exist at the time the story takes place. Not that I shoot for historical accuracy, anyway - most of the drawings have towering skyscrapers. In any case, I may end up reverting them back.
I think Sanreils just needed to have his edges softened a bit. I upped the saturation of his hair, too - the paler variety seemed a bit too unnatural. Also, more highlights!
Erisian wrote:
Thanks
But I don't upload all the goof-ups