ek22 wrote:
From what I can see here you did a good job of it for a first try. Good work on hiding protruding elbow bone, and the laugh line around her lips. If you increase the highlights on her lips just a tiny bit they will look wetter and for some reason that's desirable to overall appearance. Little tip for the chest area, if you're retouching you're prrrrobably trying to go deeper with a little cleavage. I know, controversial, but if you don't go way out of bounds with it, it can give her better texture overall. Right now the retouched chest area has a large highlight on it and it should be more of a subtle shadow. Concave, knowadda mean?
Yeah. i think it too much light on teh chest.
i know that to better produce "dodge & burn" you e.g. i need to study the
chiaroscuro i will read all posts again to mark all advices/tips/gaps
Akros wrote:
Yah!
To first attempt at retouching its excellent!
A gif can help some people more easily see some changes. (click to enlarge)
thank you very much sir.