I'm quite happy with this one... I made the planetoid surface in Sketchup, rendered in Blender, drew the figure and added her as a layer.

It is important that the image is dark, just not sure if I maybe made it a bit TOO dark...

Nice much better than I can do

If you enlarge it you can see the image properly. Only thing I would question is....the light around the figure looks like a spotlight and the reflection shows two lights?

Yes, that's a bit of artistic licence I suppose, if I was making it more realistic there would be two spotlights on the surface of the ice in front of the figure, but if I did that I think it would wash out the reflection (which is an important element of the story). Also, the main figure would be even less visible, lit only from in front.