dinasset wrote:
The lights, shadows and structures of the walls are really excellent.
The square stones of the pavement "seem" to be out of perspective.
The figure is in general very well drawn.
The right foot has perfect shape, lights and shadows.
The left foot "seems" to need a better shadow definition.
The right hand on the pavement "seems" to need better lights/shadows definition.
A really great composition !
Thanks for the feedback! Let's address in sequence:
- The stones of the floor are not square, so I guess that could lure the eyes a little. Is there some particular part of the image where you think the perspective is off?
- I'll take another run over the left foot; I guess the heel could need some more shadows.
- Same with the hand, I'll look at improving its shadows a little
Glad the character/anatomy looks good otherwise. The composition of this was something I was experimenting with too, so great if it works out. Feedback like this is always appreciated. I'll reply here again once I update the image.
Nidhogg wrote:
I like the dungeon, and the puppet is funny. Left foot looks too small/short compared to the right.
There is the matter of perspective and foreshortening - the left foot is further away. But I'll take a closer look at it to see if something needs to be done there, thanks!
Wallace wrote:
Love your art Griatch. Thanks!
Erisian wrote:
That's beautiful Griatch. Looks like early morning and she's just woken up. Is she in some kind of prison? I prefer to think that she took shelter overnight in a castle ruin and is soon going to walk out into the sun.
Well, even if it was a prison, she doesn't appear too downtrodden over it, at least. Good that the mood of the thing does appear to come across.
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Griatch