Nice elite, like the background.

not sure if this is just my phone but I can't tell what it is. the focal and the background blends too well. still needs a flow too. keep up the nice work

nice work but I think there should be more contrast between the background and the foreground. It is hard to tell whether the foreground or the background is the focal point.

also try using a higher rate when smudging on the shoulders.(it looks like smudging anyway)

But for a beginner, do u think it is good

Got on my computer and it is easierish to see (was in bright light while looking on phone) and it does look a little better, for a beginner (like myself lol) looks great

thanks u