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 Post subject: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:21 pm  (#1) 
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A concept study as well as random training. :)

This is a sci-fi image although it's not really obvious here. Yes, her necklace is glowing. Comments and feedback appreciated as always!

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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:26 pm  (#2) 
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It's beautiful, and so realistic, but the corners of the upper lips seem a bit overlapped on the (my) right side.


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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:58 pm  (#3) 
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2-ton wrote:
It's beautiful, and so realistic, but the corners of the upper lips seem a bit overlapped on the (my) right side.

Thanks! Did some fixes to the mouth, hopefully better now. :)
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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:01 pm  (#4) 
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The picture is great. The painted or tattooed curved lines maybe just a tad darker? Her eyes are wonderful.

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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:09 pm  (#5) 
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That looks awesome! The face is good, and the neck and the facial features, all very proportionate. The hair looks really good too, the hairline and the places where it's pulled back. Really nice job!


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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 2:25 am  (#6) 
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Griatch wrote:
2-ton wrote:
It's beautiful, and so realistic, but the corners of the upper lips seem a bit overlapped on the (my) right side.

Thanks! Did some fixes to the mouth, hopefully better now. :)
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lMouth still looks a bit distorted to me: protruding lower lip, mouth oriented towards viewer and something in the mouth corners I can't really put my finger on. Her right eyebrow looks a bit short (or the left is a tad long). The rest is plain perfect!

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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 7:20 am  (#7) 
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Excellent work, as usual, Griatch. I really like the purps and lavender, as well as the skin tones and lighting.

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 Post subject: Re: Shrike - Study
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:27 pm  (#8) 
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Amanda47 wrote:
That looks awesome! The face is good, and the neck and the facial features, all very proportionate. The hair looks really good too, the hairline and the places where it's pulled back. Really nice job!

Thanks, glad you like it!
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lMouth still looks a bit distorted to me: protruding lower lip, mouth oriented towards viewer and something in the mouth corners I can't really put my finger on. Her right eyebrow looks a bit short (or the left is a tad long). The rest is plain perfect!
Good catch, I will be going back to fix some part of the facial 3D plan based on this and other feedback I've gotten. I don't think it's anything wrong with the mouth corner anatomically, but I'll ponder it a bit. The left eyebrow "turns the corner" sort to speak, so they are both the same length - but possibly the far end has become too thin so that it looks like it ends prematurely, I'll strengthen that left eyebrow a bit, thanks for the feedback!
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The picture is great. The painted or tattooed curved lines maybe just a tad darker? Her eyes are wonderful.
OK, I'll experiment a bit with darkning the lines; we'll see though, don't want them to overpower the colours either ...
GnuTux wrote:
Excellent work, as usual, Griatch. I really like the purps and lavender, as well as the skin tones and lighting.
Cool thanks!

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