Griatch wrote:
Actually, contrary to what you think yourself I think this your best one so far, Moko. I like those eyes better than the other "closeup" images you did - they look more lively and on the move rather than just staring forward - it suggests more of an inner life in the character. The glasses are a nice touch too that further helps to add interest and personality.
As for some critique, you don't really need to draw every single strand of hair when the character is so stylized anyway - it would probably look better if you merged some strands together into a more coherent haircut (an only slightly more detailed version of the smaller image you have in the background). That's just a minor technicality though.
In all this is probably not the most detailed of your works but it has the most personality (in my opinion), which is worth more than lots of details. Good job.

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Griatch
aha well...Yeah he does have more expression, I wasn't sure I liked his eyes they looked awkward to me but I guess I was wrong. xD
I knowwwwwwww I don't have to add so much detail to the "hair" and stuff but I feel like I'm being lazy and I get really weird and stuff. xD
I'm glad you liked him!

AnMal wrote:
Mokonafan: i thought just like Griatch. that this is the one with the most personality of all the close ups

! you don't even get to see his beak properly and you still get a vivid impression of who he is - and that's a great achievement, Moko! i really liked this one and i think you're doing great with your close ups. how many have you got left now? is Tilly the toucan the last?
I find it funny that I still am not totally happy with him but you people seem to think he's better. Lol!

I have one left out of the Furry Friends (for now, there will be a few more characters later on..Already have one in development), but I think they will have a special unnamed guest to their close-ups...Though I'm not sure it'll be a total close-up..We'll see.

Thank you for the compliments, I'm glad you like them. x:
gramg wrote:
I like them all very much!
molly wrote:
I think he is really cute...love the glasses.
aha thank you both!
