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 Post subject: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 2:48 pm  (#1) 
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Ok so i trust everyones opinion to do this, I trying to better myself as an artist i think i'm ok imo but what do you guys think i need to do to better myself, be honest with me.
http://gimpchat.com/download/file.php?id=2930
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http://gimpchat.com/download/file.php?id=2932
http://gimpchat.com/download/file.php?id=2649
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http://gimpchat.com/download/file.php?id=2823
http://gimpchat.com/download/file.php?id=2872

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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 3:20 pm  (#2) 
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might start with a link to some of your work.


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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 3:37 pm  (#3) 
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ico4498 wrote:
might start with a link to some of your work.

click the links at the top

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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 3:45 pm  (#4) 
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I think they are all super. I wish I knew how to do that skin like on yours. maybe you could give a small tute. great work alonte

I would like to know how to do the colored up close one of Angelina.... How do you make the skin so nice

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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 8:16 am  (#5) 
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They all look good to me. :)

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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 11:38 am  (#6) 
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Alonte wrote:

Cool effect...

Alonte wrote:

Not enough texture... looks made of plastic.

Alonte wrote:

Idea is nice, but the lack of visible cleavage makes me think that the breasts start below the water, somewhere around her navel :)

Alonte wrote:

To smooth for me (plastic again) and the blurry lips don't match the rest.

Alonte wrote:
Keeping color in both eyes was a cool idea.

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Pleasing result.

Alonte wrote:

Very well done. I would just have avoided putting the reflection axis right in the middle. I would have shifted it down (at 260-270)

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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:16 pm  (#7) 
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molly wrote:
I think they are all super. I wish I knew how to do that skin like on yours. maybe you could give a small tute. great work alonte

I would like to know how to do the colored up close one of Angelina.... How do you make the skin so nice

thanks molly, I'll try and see if i can make a tute for you I never made one so I can't promise it will be the best, I first have to remember what i did :lol i create alot of my work on the fly so i don't remember right off hand i'll have to retrace my steps.

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 Post subject: Re: constructive critisim
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:17 pm  (#8) 
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ofnuts wrote:
Alonte wrote:

Cool effect...

Alonte wrote:

Not enough texture... looks made of plastic.

Alonte wrote:

Idea is nice, but the lack of visible cleavage makes me think that the breasts start below the water, somewhere around her navel :)

Alonte wrote:

To smooth for me (plastic again) and the blurry lips don't match the rest.

Alonte wrote:
Keeping color in both eyes was a cool idea.

Alonte wrote:

Pleasing result.

Alonte wrote:

Very well done. I would just have avoided putting the reflection axis right in the middle. I would have shifted it down (at 260-270)

thanks for the help ofnuts.

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