this is a snippet of a story i've been working on, it's still a W.I.P i also haven't found a title for it yet
tell me what you think.when it's done it will be a thriller\narrative Hopefully anyway, it's my first time writing a novel.

When a guy sets out to play his game he often encounters two types of women,
those that like to play games and those that don't, The women that don't
are the ones you see cussing guys out, throwing drinks in his face, etc etc
you know, the norm she'll read into his game and call him on it "screw you!
you think your slick..." they don't like to play games, but then there's the
other woman. She'll read the same thing the other woman did but respond differ-
ently, in her mind she'll say "OK I’ll play" at that moment the game has just
been changed your now playing by her rules on her time and there's no happy
ending to this game someone is going to get played tonight. she'll lead you
into a story so suspenseful it'll make Alfred Hitchcock jealous, half way into
the night you'll forget your in a game (she didn't but you did) and start to
fall for her for real, that's when the real fun begins (at least for her anyway).
Everything that happens from this point on is all in the game(including
sex remember her rules her time)the rules are simply this, there aren't any

An interesting concept and your writing style is good. I've often started novels but never had the patience to finish them.

thanks,I've never done it be for so wish me luck I hope it comes out ok

Good luck!