XTIN: Sex Magick Ch 1 (Safe for Work space fanstasy, not much sex)

Erisian · **Posted:** Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:47 am **(#2)**

Outstanding work. I could never do a graphic novel because my characters wouldn't look the same from frame to frame.

2-ton · **Posted:** Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:53 am **(#3)**

is this the same as I used to see posted on gimp talk? The wierd space queen who tortured other people, etc? This is quite artistic in the drawing, and not so gory, lol. Very nicely done.

Rod · **Joined:** May 16, 2010 **Posts:** 16173

Very good work.

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

Erisian - I have trouble with likenesses too. The only reason I'm attempting this is because I have a small cast and they're not much alike.

2-ton - This is the second half of that book. It won't be a no-holds-barred effort like "The Dragon's Dreamworld." I don't think I could sell this idea with a bunch of graphic sex. Despite the title I'm planning to stay as far away from sex as possible. Maybe you'll get a little side boob at the end. The spiritual aspect is what's important to this story, not the visuals.

The Broken is a gory creature, but the gore in Sex Magick will be of the monster movie variety.

The characters are getting mentally tortured, but I'm not anticipating physical torture.

Rod - Thanks!

Oregonian · **Posted:** Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:52 pm **(#6)**

Astoundingly good! Excellent.

K1TesseraEna · **Joined:** Sep 22, 2012 **Posts:** 2089 **Location:** US

Impressive work...

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

Anyone confused yet?

Oregonian, K1TesseraEna - Thanks, more to come!

2-ton · **Posted:** Sat Oct 19, 2013 9:11 am **(#9)**

whatever that glowing disk is, he want's it! The art work is amazing.

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

The glowing disk is a mandala for summoning the demoness Ulupi. It would be clear on page 8, if page 8 were done.

The painting style is working out this time. If I can loosen up and get better with color, I think I can get it nearly as "fast" as the line art. Newer versions of GIMP will help too.

PhotoComix · **Joined:** Apr 12, 2010 **Posts:** 5870

Very nice
but what the relation with the previous "XTIN" novel?

I have some doubts for the title :
it may scare away who dislike Eros in comix and delude who is looking for it

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

Did you get to read the end of The Dragon's Dreamworld?

Sex Magick picks up a little after the end of TDDW.

i'm still debating the title. I'm worried "Sex Magick" will hold the book back, but it is an important part of the book.

PhotoComix · **Joined:** Apr 12, 2010 **Posts:** 5870

Jeremy_Ray wrote:

Did you get to read the end of The Dragon's Dreamworld?

no i read many pages time ago on gimptalk but i fear to have missed the last pages ,did you published somewhere all the first part ?

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

It ran to completion at XTIN.NET, but I've since taken the site down. I might sell it in print or as a .pdf at some point in the future. Depends on how well Sex Magick does.

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

YAFU · **Joined:** Nov 09, 2011 **Posts:** 726

Those drawings are amazing.

Great job there!

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

Thanks! How's the story working?

YAFU · **Joined:** Nov 09, 2011 **Posts:** 726

Sorry, I can not opine on the story. Where this is not a technical English is difficult for me. Then I will try to read the story with an online translator in hand.

Jeremy_Ray · **Joined:** Jun 08, 2012 **Posts:** 32

O.K. What is your native language?

YAFU · **Joined:** Nov 09, 2011 **Posts:** 726

Hi. It's Spanish.