I think it would look better if the Dark Part of the Eye was there, not covered up by the modification.

idk how to do that

I would just erase the part of the Planet thing or whatever it is that is over the Black Circle in the middle of the eye

easier than said than done sheesh

Looks like a volcano is about to erupt.

Looks like IknowGimps exploding planet tutorial design overlayed on the eye?
Looks pretty neat.

ya i do not like to copy tutorials i like to learn from a tutorial and make my own creation

Looks pretty cool, good idea and looks great!